Monday, March 27, 2006

Knock-Knock



Everytime the door bell rang
It is you, my sloppy heart sang
And...
Everytime the phone beeped
It is you, my thoughts leaped

Samy

4 comments:

  1. Whatever ur philosophy, to me you look like an existentialist. Your poems and thoughts traverse a spectrum: love, dread, longing, freedom, awareness and consciousness of existing. I am sure many of your peer group will find it hard to follow or understand you!

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  2. To Max: This guy has a lot of talent. I wish he is noticed sooner better than later.

    Dr. AK Jha

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  3. There is a theory that every new poem, like an engineer's drawing, should sum up all that has gone before and take it a step further, which means that before anything worthwhile can be written everything worthwhile must be read.

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  4. The proof of a poem is not that we have never forgotten it, but we knew at sight we never could forget it. you write very well.

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