Love is setting up early alarms
and melting into bracing arms
Little strokes on the hand
saving a solitary hair strand
When all blades in the meadow
and all pines in my clough
Despite their lavish lush
can't match your sweet blush
Sound of the summer rain
brings back your images again
Duck's quack or goose' honk
I can hear you in every cronk
Million maddening mysteries to crack
and only your memories to stack
Dreams locked away in glee
open only to your magical key
Love is waking up each nightly hour
to check on the mystic flower
to look at the alarm clock
and answer heart's tender knock
samy
Wafa, 22, Jordan said...
ReplyDeleteMarvellous.
marvellous
marvellous
This goes on to prove that you are a very very gifted guy. I am logged in from my college and I showed this poem to all my friends.
We are impressed.
Love you
Wafa and friends,
amman, jordan
Soulful poetry.
ReplyDeleteThe best I have read in a long while. So original and refreshing.
harpreet
aha -- caught you, sameer.
ReplyDeleteGuess who!
Pradip.
Bharat gave me your link. I am in Sahara TV and I think you rock man.
Such a great blog. Today's poem is ... Wow!!!
I'll read you more often.
Do write to me at pradeeps@sahara.com...
aap to busy hai, malum hai call nahi karenge.
Pradip
These are really beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteAll the best, man.
kudos
Whoever you wrote it for, must consider herself lucky.
ReplyDeleteThese are such intense, powerful words.
garry
Power-writing. There is everything in it: love-emotions-nature-care.
ReplyDeleteit is hard to find true gentlemen romantics like you. Yours is a vanishing tribe, sameer.
I agree and disagree with you. Love is beautiful and when it comes to describe such feelings, poets -- like you -- can weave magic but I think the era of romanticism is well and over, sir.
ReplyDeleteAnand
Dear Mr Anand,
ReplyDeleteInfatuation is when you think he's as sexy as Robert Redford, as smart as Henry Kissinger, as noble as Ralph Nader, as funny as Woody Allen, and as athletic as Jimmy Conners.
Love is when you realize that he's as sexy as Woody Allen, as smart as Jimmy Connors, as funny as Ralph Nader, as athletic as Henry Kissinger and nothing like Robert Redford - but you'll take him anyway.
Think it over.
Thanks
Sameer
it is a nice effort
ReplyDeleteLOL, I like your short-soul-searching poems.
ReplyDeleteA musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write, if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What one can be, one must be.