Tuesday, May 16, 2006

Unnoticed!!!

Like last night's rain
that fell on your lane
upon my stupid dreams
when the bed went cold

Like the humming bird
which calls its mate
on lonely nights
when black thunders roar

Like old mulberry tree
full of ripe juice
which moists some lips
but spoils my new shirt

Like a bee which is busy
kissing endless flowers
massing sweet piles of honey
in the jagged old comb

You too are pre-occupied
like the slanting rain and tree
Like the humming bird and bee
To even notice me

Samy

11 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 15, 2006

    As beautiful as poetry can get.

    A

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  2. AnonymousMay 15, 2006

    I love your words, Sam.

    So intense and striking.

    Josh

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  3. AnonymousMay 15, 2006

    Good blog and a raelly nice poem. Reflective, as I would like to call it.

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  4. AnonymousMay 15, 2006

    Are you a literature student?
    I am impressed here.

    Anushman, 25, New Delhi

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  5. AnonymousMay 15, 2006

    Great poem.

    Fuz

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  6. AnonymousMay 16, 2006

    I like that peom. I have already pulled a print-out and plan to give it to my girl.

    Thanks, man.

    Justin

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  7. AnonymousMay 16, 2006

    You heard the word INTENSE. That is what each word of yours is.


    Garry

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  8. AnonymousMay 16, 2006

    Very good. Keep up the good work.

    Dr Anil

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  9. AnonymousMay 17, 2006

    great lines

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  10. AnonymousMay 19, 2006

    I did, just that u did not notice this time

    Love

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