Saturday, June 17, 2006

Only if....


Only if I could fly
I would hover round thee
Only if dreams came true
I would never let you go
Only if flowers grew in snow
I would pick all of them for you
Only if time stood still
I would freeze in your thought
Only if week-days were off
I would just color portraits of you
Only if pebbles were diamonds
I would stack them up for you
Only if it rained forever
I would walk you for miles
Only if life was magical
I would surprise ye always
Only if God gave me another life
I would not stop loving you!

Samy

8 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 16, 2006

    MESMERIZING Sam....
    The greatest poet/The wildest lover/The magician...

    Mehak

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  2. AnonymousJune 16, 2006

    Sameer,

    I like these words of yours. They seem to come from some beautiful depth, inside you. I'm a literature student from JNU.

    I admire the innocent sparkling in you. I hope you carry on with this endeavour.

    Kudos for your writings.

    Arman
    R-21, Main Boys hostel
    JNU, Delhi

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  3. AnonymousJune 16, 2006

    Good gracious. Lovely lovely words. I am speechless. How can you be so effortless?

    Lucerno

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  4. AnonymousJune 16, 2006

    Dearie,

    simple-lucid-sam.

    Usually you are not this simple. There is a sudden beauty in simple lines, as well. Like todays poem tells us.

    Anju

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  5. AnonymousJune 16, 2006

    Tell me two things please:
    -How can people be so consistantly good? that too every time.
    -How do these poems occur to you? Why don't they occur to me.

    Payal

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  6. AnonymousJune 16, 2006

    You have a thing for nature. Right. Birds/flowers/trees always feature in your writings.

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  7. AnonymousJune 16, 2006

    hmm...excellent.
    What else can one say!

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  8. AnonymousJune 19, 2006

    i liked it.. (and your pic too..) and i even translated it into turkis.. just for fun.. because i wanted to.. you wont understand a word of it though..
    it is mostly the same with you.. i just changed some of it.. like some words.. some felings.. MY FEELINGS .. haha :)

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